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Black Bull revisioned
« on: April 06, 2005, 08:27:06 PM »
So my folklore teacher expanded the semester project to include creative projects. I'll be able to do Black Bull for it after all. What I'm going to do is to turn it into a long short story (perhaps 40 pages) for the purposes of this assignment, which will, I think, give me a better outline for finishing the story. I'm kind of following the Angela Carter model, if any of you have read any of her work. Only it will be more YA, and not include any sexual stuff the way hers does. :P

So, writing group crew, in about two weeks I should have a nice draft of it for your reading pleasure. Anyone up for a read-through and meet later this month?
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 10:14:53 PM »
I think I'll be up for it.

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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2005, 02:43:55 AM »
Me, me, me!!

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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2005, 12:43:52 PM »
I volunteer?
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2005, 02:31:39 PM »
Yay! So, not this next Wed., but the next week, I will have a submission.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2005, 02:54:37 PM »
Is this the Folklore course at BYU?

Seeing as I may be returning there shortly (and in the English department), I'd be interested in getting a little background about the project and how your story relates to it.  I remember that the Folklore class was one I was very interested in...
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2005, 06:37:21 PM »
No, I'm getting my master's in children's literature at Simmons College in Boston. I haven't lived in Provo for four years.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2005, 09:22:33 PM »
Oh, okay.

I should have known.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #8 on: April 08, 2005, 12:13:49 AM »
By the way, I'm having trouble with our internet connection here at home, and my email doesn't seem to be updating. SE, can you coordinate email addresses with JadeKnight instead?
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #9 on: April 08, 2005, 09:23:00 AM »
yes, send it to my address in my account here. I'll make up a new address. See also the meeting coordination thread. I have stuffs to say.

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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #10 on: April 08, 2005, 10:00:30 PM »
So should I email Saint e?
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #11 on: April 08, 2005, 10:32:07 PM »
Yes, sorry--email him on the editorial account here on TWG. I don't know the address exactly, but I think it's on the staff page.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #12 on: May 03, 2005, 01:53:59 AM »
Yay! Cheer for me, for today is an auspicious day. I have FINISHED a first draft of a Black Bull of Norroway novelette. The short story wasn't cutting down short enough, so I just went with it. It's 54 manuscript pages long. 12,319 words. Wow. That's about 1/3 to 1/4 of the target length of a YA novel. (If I remember right, most are about 40-50,000 words. Could be wrong, as my brain is currently mush.)

Even more momentous, this is the first time since my creative writing class my last year at BYU that I've finished a story, and the first time I ever wrote a battle scene. I do really well at beginnings, but endings are hard.

Fuzzy, EUOL, HoM, etc. (anyone who I haven't already emailed it to, that is)--if you'd like to read it and give good (but gentle) feedback by tomorrow night, let me know. It's due Wed. and I need to fix lots of things, I know, but any issue but the most glaring that goes very deep into the structure of the story without specific prescriptive suggestions will probably be tossed into the "fix later" barrel.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #13 on: May 03, 2005, 01:58:44 AM »
I'd like to.
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Re: Black Bull revisioned
« Reply #14 on: May 03, 2005, 02:10:05 AM »
Sent.
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