So I bit the bullet and just sent the query to Moshe!
I went with:
Kail thought he was just an average kid until his best friend entrusted him with a magic sword with his dying breath. After it transports him to another world of magic and legends he'll be confronted with the seemingly impossible task of overcoming faeries, unkillable body snatchers and even gods in order to keep his promise to his friend. But while there he will meet a beautiful troll that will reveal to him that he is more then mortal--a Godslayer. Alone and stranded, he will have to make a choice: save the one he loves, or save the world.
He told me he'd look at it, unless its YA! LOL. If it's YA he has to refer it to Susan Chang since she's Tor's YA editor. But he also offered to help me get in contact with her!
All in all, I'm happy with the response I got. It seems positive.
I replied to him and explained that I wrote it thinking it would be YA, but that others have told me that they don't think that it is. I gave him a little more info. We'll see if he thinks its a YA or not.