If Frog had a problem with cynics, she and I wouldn't have managed to coexist in the same writing group for this long.
Anyway, my comments. Not much, I'm afraid... I'm having an off-week?
Raven's dialect is bugging me a bit. Particularly the "wot" thing. It just seems a little forced.
I'm not sold on the genie's dialogue, either--this is after Aishia comes back to her room. He just sounds, well, almost like a little kid at times.
I just realized I still don't actually know how old Aishia is, unless I missed it. She seems rather young in these couple chapters... I've pegged her at around 13.
I have to agree with RC. I won't say I was bored, exactly, but I didn't feel like I was getting the forward motion out of it that I wanted. I was originally going to say that I wanted a hint of what the larger story ws about by this point, but you do give us--well, a small hint at least in the spying scene, so that's not the problem (or not all of it).
I think RC is right; it's not that there's no tension in these scenes, or no potential for it, it's just that you've missed the opportunity by not hamming it up some.