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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #270 on: April 03, 2010, 03:22:31 AM »
Quote from: Recovering_Cynic on March 26, 2010, 09:30:07 PM
I sent off Discharge to Writers of the Future yesterday.  *crosses fingers*

Crap, I was hoping I'd have the chance to critique it before you did. I feel guilty now.

(I'll still critique it when I have the chance, of course.)

Anyway, best of luck.
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #271 on: April 03, 2010, 04:18:57 AM »
Don't worry Silk.  The version you have is completely obsolete now anyway.  Of the fifty or so people who have read it (or a draft of it) I think only two didn't like it, and those two stopped reading after five pages, so my faith in them only goes so far.  What I'm saying is, if you'd like to read the polished version, I can send it to you.  Most people have loved the story.
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #272 on: April 03, 2010, 04:46:42 AM »
Yeah, send it my way! I'm curious if nothing else. :)

Though it goes without saying that I probably won't get to it right away. ::)
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #273 on: April 03, 2010, 05:40:19 AM »
What Silk said applies to me as well :) I'd love to see it.
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #274 on: April 24, 2010, 12:22:49 AM »
Hey all. I have some time to critique this coming week but so much back log that I don't think I will be trying to do all of them since I'm not sure who is still active and still looking for critiques for older stuff. So, let me know if there is one you still waiting for more feedback on if you have an updated version of a submit you want some fresh eyes on. Otherwise I'll just pick out a few to do and let the pieces fall where they may.... :P
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #275 on: April 24, 2010, 04:06:31 AM »
Yeah, I'm in the same boat as Frog.  I have two months worth of stories to read.  If you want someone to a take another look at your story, pipe up now or forever hold your peace.  Otherwise, I'm just going to pick and choose...
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #276 on: April 24, 2010, 04:09:18 AM »
*raises his hand* Oooh! Oooh! Me me me!

...wait... have you commented on mine yet? I can't actually remember...
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #277 on: April 24, 2010, 04:31:02 AM »
Apparently I need to write more since all of you have time now.  Off to try not to butcher my next chapter.
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #278 on: April 24, 2010, 02:05:11 PM »
Well, I know I haven't Shivertongue. I'll do your two chapters next (that is all there is, right?). Anyone else?
And yes, falcon. This week would be the week to do it. Get moving.  >:(
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #279 on: April 24, 2010, 04:04:13 PM »
Quote from: Frog on April 24, 2010, 12:22:49 AM
Hey all. I have some time to critique this coming week but so much back log that I don't think I will be trying to do all of them since I'm not sure who is still active and still looking for critiques for older stuff. So, let me know if there is one you still waiting for more feedback on if you have an updated version of a submit you want some fresh eyes on. Otherwise I'll just pick out a few to do and let the pieces fall where they may.... :P

I also will be doing this. FYI, I only got two critiques on "To Wish Upon a Dragon", so I'm definitely interested in more if you have the time. :)
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #280 on: April 24, 2010, 10:21:17 PM »
Er... wasn't I one of those critiquers? 
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #281 on: April 25, 2010, 07:44:07 AM »
Yes, I believe you were. Thanks for  that, by the way.
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #282 on: April 28, 2010, 07:50:01 PM »
You're next Ryos (Muhahahaha!)   


Edit: And done. Anyone else? I think I could probably do at least 2-3 more....
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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #283 on: April 29, 2010, 07:21:52 AM »
Making probably-final edits on an older manuscript right now. Most of what I've got for it will be easy stuff to fix. As for the biggest problem with the ms, I've finally figured out WHAT I do in order to fix it, just not how. It's looking kind of unlikely that I will have this ready by Friday. Oh well. ::)

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Re: Progress and Submission Reports
« Reply #284 on: May 20, 2010, 04:36:08 PM »
LTU is very surprised at how fast he is moving through Six Stones.  It must be because everyone gave him good idea that worked.  That must be it.  That means this success is your faults.
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