Author Topic: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue  (Read 5583 times)

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #15 on: December 06, 2008, 03:53:25 AM »
Haha. I really should crack open the old Latin textbook one of these days. Such a neat, challenging language, and I've gone and forgotten it all.

I've never read dictionaries, though. :P

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #16 on: December 06, 2008, 04:47:10 AM »
The plots can be hard to follow...
"When I came to this town five years ago I didn't have a nickle in my pocket. Now I have a nickle in my pocket."

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #17 on: December 06, 2008, 06:19:40 AM »
I'm very impressed with Mr. Webster's prose however. His use of alliterations is impressive. So many words that start with A. . . .

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #18 on: December 06, 2008, 09:13:25 AM »
Indeed! One would almost think he had some sort of aid to finding so many words that begin with the same letter...

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #19 on: December 08, 2008, 07:59:44 AM »
Fatalchemie sounds as though it could be a strong enough premise to carry a complete novel in itself. And a pretty cool one at that.


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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #20 on: December 08, 2008, 08:33:08 AM »
Fatalchemie makes me think of the less successful alchemists, may they rest in peace...

Of course, if you are aiming for punny a la Xanth, et al, then have fun with it.
"When I came to this town five years ago I didn't have a nickle in my pocket. Now I have a nickle in my pocket."

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #21 on: December 08, 2008, 08:45:01 AM »
Just to be sure, I was referring to the idea behind it, which has a nigh unlimited potential for chaos and mayhem in it.
The name itself reeks of people famous for the wrong reasons.

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #22 on: December 08, 2008, 09:35:22 AM »
You know, I'll admit that I haven't really thought much of the possibilities with the Fatalchemy. I'm afraid that, at the time, I do not plan on having it play a very large part in my story. However, that could change.  I do intend to write more stories from this same setting, though, so I'm bound to use it at some point.
As for the sound of the name. . . I agree with Karl. It just sounds..... hazardous. That was one of the names that I really wanted to change up.... we'll see what happens.

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #23 on: December 08, 2008, 09:41:41 AM »
I was gonna say, just because it's a cool idea doesn't mean it has to go in THIS book. You might be doing the both the book and the idea a disservice, if you tried...

But that's for you to judge, not me. ~^

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Re: Dec 1st, 08 - Birthright - Prologue
« Reply #24 on: December 08, 2008, 04:16:34 PM »
I was gonna say, just because it's a cool idea doesn't mean it has to go in THIS book.

Very true. It will probably only be showing up a handful of times in this book.