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Eric James Stone

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"Loophole"
« on: May 09, 2006, 03:04:52 PM »
My story "Loophole" was published last week in UVSC's SF&F magazine, Warp & Weave.  Today, it was published on Popcorn Popping, so you can read it here.
Eric James Stone
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Re: "Loophole"
« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2006, 04:39:25 PM »
Dude.  That rocked.  Good story.  I read the comments and don't agree with any of the flaws pointed out.  You walked a nice balance between too much and too little information dump.

Nice.
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Re: "Loophole"
« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2006, 09:06:38 PM »
That was great. Quite the interesting twist on meeting the in-laws. And just when he thinks it can't get worse...
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