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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 20, 2007, 07:30:41 AM »
I just started and I'm pleasantly surprised to find another pretty original magic system (It seems a little too voodoo oriented to be fully original)
The description of magic is quite interesting, but the BioChromatic sounds too high tech for the world I'm expecting robots or cloning tanks at the least when I hear BioChromatic.
To ease me into the world why not Chromancy, ChromaticArts, or Chromatology?
One more nitpick
By the way the earlier thread about apostrophes opened my eyes to how others could find them annoying -- I find that they fill the gap that a schwa cannot easily fill. (the upsidedown e saying -- I don't make much sound.)
Thank you Euol for giving us the chance to make our comments.
Sorry if I missed a post in the 29 pages hence.
The description of magic is quite interesting, but the BioChromatic sounds too high tech for the world I'm expecting robots or cloning tanks at the least when I hear BioChromatic.
To ease me into the world why not Chromancy, ChromaticArts, or Chromatology?
One more nitpick
Quote
The man hung from the ceiling, naked and chainedI thought that he was hung when I first read this, perhaps "Chains hung the naked prisoner to the ceiling" or something of the like -- emphasizing not hanging, but chains.
By the way the earlier thread about apostrophes opened my eyes to how others could find them annoying -- I find that they fill the gap that a schwa cannot easily fill. (the upsidedown e saying -- I don't make much sound.)
Thank you Euol for giving us the chance to make our comments.
Sorry if I missed a post in the 29 pages hence.