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Reading Excuses / Re: Reading Excuses - Nov. 16 - lethalfalcon - Mortal Divinity - Chapter 2
« on: November 19, 2009, 10:56:31 PM »
Hrm. I expected to get a decent ripping, and you haven't disappointed.
Okay, I see your point and raise you an explanation and question:
Evocation (one of the four runecasting disciplines) does work off of Aristotle's classical elements, including all five (earth, fire, air, water, aether). Each of the runes depicted therein has a very specific base line with very specific radials defining element type(s) and structure, and modifiers for range, position, and strength (so far). Now, given that (and it's something that most people can relate with), it's a very small subset of the entire magic system. There's also infusion (runes that would modify your body), enchantment (pretty self-explanatory), and summoning (summons are the embodiment of magic into an organic structure with a bit of the consciousness of the wielder "stuck" to it). These are mostly things I don't want to infodump into the second chapter of my book.
I suppose, yes, it comes across as "it's been done before". Of course, so has everything else. I could go into the chinese elemental systems and add wood and metal, and give you at least one MMO that has done it (and numerous books, I'm sure). I could go with a more force-like power, and step on Star Wars. I could make the runes stand for specific spells/be a language and rip off Elantris and dozens of other runic systems. I guess my point is that everything has been done, and it's just how you use it that defines its uniqueness.
That said, I'm not really defending my system. If you don't like it/think it's cliche/want to kill me for using it that's plenty fine. My corpse will still be your friend. I can get away with explaining Zellenya's summons a little better, to illustrate that they're not *actual* summoned creatures (think of them like elementals, but with better makeup). My question is this: is it that you hate the magic system, or is it that you're so biased by all the bad anime you've watched (not saying all anime is bad, but...) that you cannot stand "yet another classical element-based" system?
At any rate, I thank you for the scathing. It's making me depth-ize (yes, I use made-up words, too) the magic a bit.
P.S. Naruto? Really? C'mon, that's pretty harsh.
Okay, I see your point and raise you an explanation and question:
Evocation (one of the four runecasting disciplines) does work off of Aristotle's classical elements, including all five (earth, fire, air, water, aether). Each of the runes depicted therein has a very specific base line with very specific radials defining element type(s) and structure, and modifiers for range, position, and strength (so far). Now, given that (and it's something that most people can relate with), it's a very small subset of the entire magic system. There's also infusion (runes that would modify your body), enchantment (pretty self-explanatory), and summoning (summons are the embodiment of magic into an organic structure with a bit of the consciousness of the wielder "stuck" to it). These are mostly things I don't want to infodump into the second chapter of my book.
I suppose, yes, it comes across as "it's been done before". Of course, so has everything else. I could go into the chinese elemental systems and add wood and metal, and give you at least one MMO that has done it (and numerous books, I'm sure). I could go with a more force-like power, and step on Star Wars. I could make the runes stand for specific spells/be a language and rip off Elantris and dozens of other runic systems. I guess my point is that everything has been done, and it's just how you use it that defines its uniqueness.
That said, I'm not really defending my system. If you don't like it/think it's cliche/want to kill me for using it that's plenty fine. My corpse will still be your friend. I can get away with explaining Zellenya's summons a little better, to illustrate that they're not *actual* summoned creatures (think of them like elementals, but with better makeup). My question is this: is it that you hate the magic system, or is it that you're so biased by all the bad anime you've watched (not saying all anime is bad, but...) that you cannot stand "yet another classical element-based" system?
At any rate, I thank you for the scathing. It's making me depth-ize (yes, I use made-up words, too) the magic a bit.
P.S. Naruto? Really? C'mon, that's pretty harsh.