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Reading Excuses / Re: May 31 - recovering cynic - soldiers of the sun guard (new draft)
« on: June 01, 2010, 11:47:31 AM »
New draft sent
A lot of people describe Scalzi’s Old Man's War novels as military science fiction, but I would classify its sequel Zoë’s Tale as a space opera. It’s a story about, well, Zoë, a teenage girl whose parents are invited to take leadership roles in building a colony on a new planet. Zoë is an enthusiastic member of the group sent to colonize Roanoke, despite the risks—and the risks are considerable even before the political machinations of greater powers boil to the surface. Continue reading Zoë’s Tale
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Second, I have a problem with the beginning. Usually, when you introduce a new character, you have a sort of mini-hook to get the reader interested (or detesting) that character. You can show off one of their skills, or put them in a dangerous situation, or something. You have her just sitting around, listening to some music and trading banter with the King. To me, this indicates a bit of a boring character, which makes me want to skim through her sections. Honestly, when I read the first sentence, I was hoping that somehow the music was going to be special (magic, or perhaps some eerie Twilight Zone stuff, or perhaps even a lonely person singing about their love that they'd lost and the MC was just hearing in). Instead it's just a performance. Sigh
Even here, far back into the tunnel where the sun that splashed against the walls of the entrance could not reach, the noise was overbearing.
Even here, far back into the tunnel where the sun that splashed against the walls of the entrance could not reach, the noise was overbearing.
Whether he heard the comment or not was unclear as he calmly went through his Restoration rituals.