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Brandon Sanderson / Re: A Memory of Light
« on: January 14, 2009, 06:43:24 PM »
Your idea is not stupid.  We just think you are looking at it the wrong way.  As the DO touches the world more directly, his affect on the world also increases.  Because of this, the normal wards are less and less effective.  So, it is not that Saidar/Saidin is weakening, but that the forces of destruction are getting stronger.  There is evidence of channelers having difficulty using the power in areas where extreme amounts of the power have been used (Bowl of Winds and the Cleansing).  That still doesn't mean the powers are weakening.  It's like using 100 lbs of force to lift 100 lbs, and then someone adds another 1oo lbs to it.  You are using the same amount of force, but it is no longer enough to get the job done.

I think this explanation hit the nail on the head.  If you go flip through the first books, you will see this happening--though, Jordan's touch is subtle.  To be honest, I can't remember any examples right off the top of my head as it's been a while since I read them, but I do remember seeing it when I read the first four books a second time.

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I don't like the way they talk, They do be using the word "Do" too much.  I like the way Siuan speaks, so the Tairens would be OK.  too many people would want to be Aiel.  I think I would either want to be Saldeaen or Andoran.  It's hard to choose.

Yeah...there are quite a few societies to chose from.  I actually almost chose Aiel, then I realized that I knew people would be all over that. 

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I wouldn't write anything, as I am not worthy.  The contest only allows you to have a character customized to your liking.  Brandon will still be writing the dialogue and situation.  I would be happy just to be one of the Officers named.  It would be cool if this new army came from the Isle of Madmen, but there is probably too little back story for that to make sense. 

Oh, no.  I'm not literally saying 'writing' someone in.  But if you had a character written in by Brandon, who would they be.

And yes, that would be pretty sweet.  Atrius would probably be from Illian.  I love that city.   

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Brandon Sanderson / What character would you put in The Wheel of Time?
« on: January 14, 2009, 05:13:19 PM »
http://www.brandonsanderson.com/blog/750/Do-You-Want-to-Appear-in-A-Memory-of-Light

First, if you haven't read this yet, read this as if you don't, you may be a bit confused.  If you could create a character for Brandon to use in The Wheel of Time, who would they be?

I would probably have to create a new character from scratch, as all the ones that come to my mind are from my own stories.  Though, if I just picked one, it would probably be.....

Atrius

Here's the first page of a short story I wrote about him:

Quote from: Wielder from "Tyrant"
   Atrius rubbed the sweat from his forehead.  His dark hair was plastered to his face, weaving itself into the beard that shrouded his jaw.  Two steady brown eyes peered out through his strained face, reflecting his weariness.  His white shirt showed the signs of a good day’s work—soaked so thoroughly that he saw almost no point in having it on.  His sword sat sheathed at his side.  The day had dragged on as he made his way to a lake that was all too far from the city walls.  Soft silvery waters waited ahead of him, reflecting the last rays of light as the sun slowly slid out of the sky. 
      Just a few more steps and I can be done with you.
   His left hand grasped a cloth coat that dragged behind him.  It was slightly stained in places where its owner must have been a little careless with his evening wine, but it didn’t cover the new stains Atrius had added.  Light lingered on blood that seeped down the fine brown fabric creating an illusion of hot embers that ate away at the cloth, leaving it charred.  The coat clung to a body; its lifeless legs dragging across the ground, no longer able to escape.  Atrius turned to make sure he wasn’t making much of a mess.  His eyes studied the path behind him, searching for any blood that may have trickled to the ground.  He scanned the area, his steady eyes grazing over every detail he could see and there were no signs of life—except for him, of course.  Trees obscured his vision but he doubted that anyone would be hiding behind them this close to sunset—almost everyone was inside the city walls at this point, save for bandits that skulked in the darkness waiting to ambush a careless traveler.  His eyes finally made their way to the lifeless body behind him.  Blonde hair covered half its face.  The head dangled to the side slightly, revealing a tattoo of a dagger on its neck.  He didn’t see a man; just a disruptive tool that needed to be disposed of—no more than a broken wheel.  Utterly useless. 

He's a kings...assassin for lack of a better term.  I wish I could just paste the whole thing since I'm not sure if the second paragraph will make much sense without getting a bit further, but, I think this will do. 


So what about you all?  Who would you write into The Wheel of Time?

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Just wanted to let everyone know that I sent Brandon the file that Sarah compiled (thanks, Sarah!)  and he says to tell you that he's going to work on answering the questions. Also, he wanted me to thank you all for being so awesome. So,

Thanks for being awesome, everyone! Brandon really appreciates your support. :)



Huzzah!  *patiently waits*

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mistborn Jewelry (and Elantris as well)
« on: January 02, 2009, 11:44:55 PM »
I wish I had the money to buy every single one of those things (and of course, a Fox Head Medallion...  :P).

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mistborn Jewelry (and Elantris as well)
« on: January 02, 2009, 11:40:56 PM »
Yes!  Metal Vials!!  Now I can check to see if I'm Mistborn!

On a serious note, time to get to shopping.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: A Memory of Light
« on: January 02, 2009, 07:40:03 PM »

2. Rand survives but somehow Lew's Therin finally dies completely. Thus, fullfilling the Karatheon Prophecy that the Dragon will die during Tarmon Gaidon.

3. Moiraine is saved by Matt and Thom and is returned with crucial knowledge concerning how to win Tarmon Gaidon.

4. One of the Forsaken will help Rand win Tarmon Gaidon not sure which one but I'm leaning toward Graendal.



I agree with all of those.  BTW, I voted one or two...though...I'm sure there will be a couple.  I can't wait to read that book!  ARGG

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2.  Going along with that, I'm surprised that after Vin destroyed herself along with Ruin that he didn't immediately suicide the instant that he regained full control over himself.  So I guess the question is: did he regain full control after Ruin died?  If he did, why didn't he immediately kill himself, as that seems to have been his fondest wish for about the past two years?

I don't know the answers, but here are some ideas:

1) He actually felt Ruin die.  We see earlier that he can see into Ruin's mind.  When Ruin died, maybe he actually knew what happened.  Without the potential to be controlled, maybe he didn't feel the need to kill himself.

2) He went unconscious when Ruin died.  By the time he came to, it was all over and Sazed was able to explain the new situation to him.

Both of those are exactly what I was thinking.  I thought it was along the line of number one, and the moment Sazed took the power, the two could communicate with each other.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: December 30, 2008, 05:07:26 PM »
Just finished the book, giving a review later (I still can't contain my thoughts)

But I have a couple of questions that really need answering right now. First, when Vasher sneaked into Mercystar's palace, what was he after?

Second, who's the second intruder who entered and killed the servant right after Vasher sneaked in, as Lightsong had concluded?

Anybody knows?

Bold: I think he was just curious.  It means that their 'Gods' were hiding something.  Why would they need underground passage ways?  You use those to conceal your movement...and the 'Gods' shouldn't have to conceal anything.  Those are just my thoughts...  (It's been a while since I read it...so...meh)

The second intruder...I'm not exactly sure if I remember that part...I'm guessing it was Denth.  Or Bluefingers.  Probably Denth though...he's the agile one.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mistborn series (HoA) ending. Major *SPOILER* (duh)
« on: December 30, 2008, 05:01:07 PM »
I got a little misty eyed at the end of HoA, I'll admit it. Although I truly did cry when Sazed found Tindwyl's body in WoA.  :'(

Yeah, that hit me a lot harder then the end of HoA.  I really wanted to tear up when Vin and El died.  I was broken when Kel did.  I'm not quite sure if Brandon wanted this effect...but meh.  I think when a main char dies, you should be tearing up--but that might just be me.

EDIT:

And if that was a bit unclear, I (mostly) agree with the OP.  I liked the ending, but I don't think it was as emotionally powerful as it could have been.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Casting Call blog
« on: December 26, 2008, 04:39:56 PM »
Ok so I guess i will start with saying that I really liked some of your pics. I also liked the way it was set up. My main question is. . .  didn't you get that kolos pic from the fan art thread??? I know I saw it there but I dont really want to go looking for it.

Yep, it sure is.

Abominable, I love your choice on Vin.  Ellen Page has already got the smart-ass'ness down.  :p

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I finally made it through all the pages in this thread. I HAD questions and I know I had a point that no one has made yet that I have seen, 

But

Right now I can't remember then.

ARGH!!!

Ruin is tinkering with his metalminds! 

(Ignore his second post...those random questions were implanted by Ruin as a clever ruse)

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Wow, does Mr. Sanderson like -born or what?
« on: December 19, 2008, 12:28:37 AM »
Yeah, I just read Firstborn and will probably listen to it tonight.

Amazing.  That was truly awesome.

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Writing Group / Re: On Submitting Experimental Pieces
« on: December 16, 2008, 06:45:23 PM »
Fair points, both.

Though when I talk of putting this piece away I'm not talking about hiding it in the closet and never letting it see the light of day, only biding my time until I have a few other pieces under my belt, so that people actually might have a reason to believe I know what I'm doing. 'Cause once you submit, you can't resubmit.

Or I could just go with the "make the first ten pages so engrossing" plan, that sounds good too...

Yeah, this piece is only 11k words. I imagine trying to carry on a non-linear story for an entire novel would be a lot more difficult. At least if you're concerned with it also being readable. ::)

At that length, you shouldn't be too concerned.  But you have to remember something: good editors/agents are looking for reasons to throw your manuscript in the 'crap' bin.  As long as you catch their attention right at the start, you should be fine.

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