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Reading Excuses / Re: 2-2-09 Reaves: Crystalheart, chapter seven
« on: February 06, 2009, 12:00:26 AM »
YES! I also forgot to mention that I loved the skitterfly...great character!
"Magic is what makes fantasy fantastic," someone says, "you can't apply rules to them or else it loses wonder!" I respond, "Sure, but if you want to write them you will certainly want to know how they work." Writing is all about execution, and I find applying some basic laws of physics to magic systems make them more understandable and realistic. Here, I'm going to outline my basic method for developing a magic system.
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The way you describe Bael as a big, red-bearded man glancing skittishly around makes me think he is insecure. I suppose it doesn't really matter though, because he probably won't show up later, but hey.
Don't be fooled. ALL of the Western religions have taboos on sex. The Puritans were fine with married couples and (as most Christian faiths preach) believed that you should be out there going at it because it resulted in babies. But casual sex for pleasure, or sex outside of marriage was a bad thing to them.
As a person who was brought up Catholic here in the USA, it took me a long time for me to be able to step back and see that, to a very large portion of the world, (ie, to cultures other than American or European Judo-Christian) sex is not a big deal and something that should be celebrated and shared first, not bottled up and repressed.
Quote from: deckacards on Yesterday at 07:47:12 AM
For me, honestly...unless i'm doing a short story and it's relevant/fits, I avoid anything stronger than "shirt"...f*bombs and sexually explicit cuss words may add a little bit more to your character, but at great expense to your story.
I completely disagree. If, like in my newest book, all your characters are at best the scum of the earth then cussing fits. In PHYLES all my characters were well educated, and were always out of a position in which they could curse without repercussions due to class differences. otherwise cussing would've fit there too.
One of the men shouted out, ‘It’s a Soul Taker!’
“Where are you!” His voice screamed at the forest, and the silence in the air screamed back at him. Wham, a
Something was not quite right.
this monstrosity of a man who rendered his own skills useless.
glad that his plan worked out this well.
The part where she's buried didn't entirely make sense, to me. Wouldn't the first thing you notice be that you're upside down? I think it takes more than closing your eyes to fool your sense of balance, and you'd also have all the blood rushing to your head (which you feel pretty much instantly if you so much as bend over) and I assume you'd also feel the weight of your body pressing down on you. I believe practical experimentation is in order.
Slowly, the desert receded
desert dragonlizards and night owls, and of course the ever-present sand panthers.
It was an odd question, one Aermyst had never before considered
The patina of age sat heavily on it; Aermyst could almost feel that this thing was old
Aermyst took another look at the skitterfly. It was roughly angular, and had the look of something carved; he could see tiny blue symbols etched into the ivory-colored object.
The skitterfly seemed almost sad, disappointed
It's alone, Aermyst realized. It's been alone for hundreds, thousands of years, its creators are gone and it is alone
Only a few gawked at its swooping antics
Come, let us find our beds