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Reading Excuses / How many critiques do you give a week?
« on: January 30, 2009, 12:59:37 AM »
Sorry, couldn't help myself.  I was just wondering how many critiques everyone is averaging a week.  I think a good follow up poll after this one would be, "Do you feel like you get enough critiques for each submission?" 

The point of this poll isn't to see how bad we are doing (cause I personally think we are doing awesome!), I just want to see what the average is for curiosity sake.

 ;D


M

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Reading Excuses / 1-5-09 - Ace Tomato Company - Chapter Two
« on: January 05, 2009, 04:21:52 PM »
Ok, here is my brief synopsis of chapter one in case you forgot or didn't read it.

The name of the main character of this book has not be revealed and is simply referred to by his Intel Op name 323.  At this point the reader should not have much of an idea what an Intel Op is.  323 is trying to graduate from his training to be an Intel Op, so at the moment he is still just in school, not in the field.  For his final test, he is given an objective that he must complete all the while he must incorporate the help of two civilians as part of the test.  These civilians are hand picked by him, which causes a minor dilemma for 323.

Chapter one is set in the year 2010 (a new change I added based on feedback).  Chapter two starts some 13 years in the past and the book begins from here.  This chapter was originally my opening chapter but I decided to add my present chapter one as a means to hook the reader, because Chapter two is designed to introduce the three main characters of the book.

Ok, hope that wasn't too confusing.  Thanks everyone, and I WILL start critiquing more submissions this week, sorry I'm so behind.

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Reading Excuses / 12-15-08: Ace Tomato Company
« on: December 15, 2008, 06:49:06 AM »
Thanks everyone for any feedback you can give me.  It will be greatly appreciated. 

M

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