Timewaster's Guide Archive

Hello all,

In chapter 2 Tommy continues his experience in the book world.  He meets the great wolf chief Rendall and gains his first talent.  At the end of the first chapter he finds himself on the edge of a battle and finds to his horror that he is in charge.

Chapter 1 Tommy Travers loves books,  He doesn't have any friends, doesn't care about sports and doesn't bother with girls.  At least not yet.  When he turns fourteen is when it all started.  As Tommy is reading his greatest wish is granted.  He is pulled into the story and gets to meet the characters and live the adventures he has always dreamed about.  His first experience is in People of the Plains, a book about a tribe of people who live with, and communicate with wolves.  He is pulled in during the hunt of a great buck.  Tommy gets to experience first hand the difference between reading and living an adventure.

Sir Robert

I didn't see Silk's reply that there were too many posting this week until it was too late.  Big brainfart there.

Didn't see your reply Silk and posted.  I will send a notice to disregard or for those seeing this just disregard that chapter. 

Thanks Silk  I will look for it on Monday.  If there is still room I have a chapter ready as well.

I appreciate the review and the many helpful suggestions.  Looks like I have a lot of work to do.

I haven't received any submissions yet.  Is my name not on the list?

Thanks Silk for setting me up.  I can jump in on Monday if there is room.  Let me know.

Greetings fellow scratchers!   My handle is Sir Robert but you may call me Sir Robert.  I live in IL.  I am 41 and am raising 7 beautiful daughters.  I write fantasy YA and am looking for help with a story I just switched to First person.  I have been in many critique groups before and love giving as well as getting a different pov.