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Title: "Loophole"
Post by: Eric James Stone on May 09, 2006, 03:04:52 PM

My story "Loophole" was published last week in UVSC's SF&F magazine, Warp & Weave.  Today, it was published on Popcorn Popping, so you can read it here (http://www.popcornpopping.net/?p=31).

Title: Re: "Loophole"
Post by: Skar on May 09, 2006, 04:39:25 PM

Dude.  That rocked.  Good story.  I read the comments and don't agree with any of the flaws pointed out.  You walked a nice balance between too much and too little information dump.

Nice.

Title: Re: "Loophole"
Post by: guitarbabe on May 09, 2006, 09:06:38 PM

That was great. Quite the interesting twist on meeting the in-laws. And just when he thinks it can't get worse...